Treatment feedback.

In one of the lessons we presented our treatment to the class and the teacher, who is in charge of the music videos and this is the feedback we got from him:

-Think more about what type of light to use in your 2nd element and exactly how and why they turn on and off, but the idea itself is good.

-How does the light in 2nd element influence dancers and the room? Think about it.

-Finding a choreographer may be tricky.

-Contemporary interpretive dance style may not be the best choice.

-Choreography in the 2nd element should be exactly the same in order to be able to do wide shots and close-ups.

-Smoke mushrooms doesn't fit the idea, as they are brown. Red mushrooms connote drugs, don't use them unless this is what you want.

-Idea with fish in the aquarium is good. You can even try to film dancers through the aquarium to link 2nd and 3rd elements.

-3rd element has to link 1st and 2nd elements, so needs development.

-Music doesn't fit with slow fish movements in the aquarium.

-Lighting dancers from the back would make them silhouettic, which fits the 2nd element with bulbs. Think about that as a possibility. 

-Could try to add variety to first element - have her in all red in a white room, than swap and have her in all white in a red room.

-Think about 3rd element.

-Choreography needs to be considered.

-Start finding actors and props.

-And....